Reborn: Mappack

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Postby Rikaninja » 2009.03.24 (06:55)

For a while I quit map making, it just seemed boring, dull and lacking the excitement other activities offer. But now, with more time my brain can't think of things to do. Thus I shall be reborn in my mapping career with a new mappack: Reborn. I will update this as often as possible.

I have designed all my maps in my head, though I am yet to create them all, but I have started Dream 1. My maps will be recorded in dreams, and in levels. 2-4 would represent the second map in the fourth dream, there will be 10 levels in each dream. I will have the date on a notepad document and I will provide links to them on NUMA after you as the public decide on them.

Dedicated to RadiumFalcon, the very author who inspired me to make my maps.

I have subimitted the first map to NUMA, but I would like your opinions on the following maps in the attachments.

EDIT:Do attachments auto-update as I edit the file on my computer?
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Postby Amadeus » 2009.04.04 (06:22)

Hm.
Felt a little generic. Especially the second. Third was my favorite, though it felt a little to similar to the first. I might drop the first if I were you. And make it less generic, in general.
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Postby Rikaninja » 2009.04.08 (00:37)

Okay thanks for the feedback. I'll try to improve the following levels. I'm stuck on new ideas though.
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