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http://www.nmaps.net/user/malde37 · Postby **Malde37** » 2010.03.02 (19:23)

Hah, good as ever! Keep it up!

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.03.03 (00:31)

Here's another one.

Gah, this feels like such a clichè. Oh well. Hopefully Zayne will be a surprise.

http://www.nmaps.net/user/numa_ninja · Postby **numa_ninja** » 2010.03.03 (10:23)

How bizarre. I seem to not have seal of approval'd this epic comic.

Here, have a seal of approval for your troubles:

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.03.03 (19:42)

numa_ninja wrote:How bizarre. I seem to not have seal of approval'd this epic comic.

Here, have a seal of approval for your troubles:

Thanks. Wow, that's, what, my fourth one? O.o

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.03.04 (23:04)

...aaaaaand here's another comic.

Oh snap, Cyron's still alive. Didn't see that coming...

http://nmaps.net/user/XiAH · Postby **Lachesis** » 2010.03.05 (14:55)

Oh snap is right!

http://nmaps.net/user/Ignate · Postby **Ignate** » 2010.03.06 (15:08)

OH YES YES. Now this story is picking up and it is good

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.03.06 (16:15)

I figure this is long overdue.

Don't worry, I'll still be following Turiski's adventure - I'll alternate comic by comic.

http://nmaps.net/user/XiAH · Postby **Lachesis** » 2010.03.09 (14:39)

This is SO cliche. But in a good way. Hey, I just rhymed!

http://www.nmaps.net/user/malde37 · Postby **Malde37** » 2010.03.11 (04:32)

I'm quivering in my seat! ( Actually, I'm sitting on my bed.) In anticipation (More like impatience)! YAy! (Woo) Shut up, voices! I'll poke you with that Q-tip again! (Suuuure.) Don't think I won't! (I AM your thoughts. My thinking you won't means you won't) ... What? Wait-- gah! Mind Mind-tricks! Head hurts.....

Oh, and nice comic. (Nice? Pfft.)

(It's AWESOME!!!!)

http://nmaps.net/user/XiAH · Postby **Lachesis** » 2010.03.14 (20:20)

Malde37 wrote:I'm quivering in my seat! ( Actually, I'm sitting on my bed.) In anticipation (More like impatience)! YAy! (Woo) Shut up, voices! I'll poke you with that Q-tip again! (Suuuure.) Don't think I won't! (I AM your thoughts. My thinking you won't means you won't) ... What? Wait-- gah! Mind Mind-tricks! Head hurts.....

Oh, and nice comic. (Nice? Pfft.)

(It's AWESOME!!!!)

Wow.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.03.20 (12:27)

NO IT'S NOT ON HIATUS AGAIN.

Sorry for the empty margins - I had to rearrange the panels to make it uncondensed (I use tinypic) and it was done rather hastily.

http://www.nmaps.net/user/malde37 · Postby **Malde37** » 2010.03.26 (17:53)

Kewlio!

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.04.17 (01:24)

My god it's another one.

Sometime's that's just all you can say.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.05.01 (16:49)

I choose to believe people have not stopped reading this. Self-delusion is fun. :P

Things are getting epic again. I expect this season to last until episode 60, then there'll be one more before the end.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.05.07 (19:49)

Triple post. I feel like Turiski must have.

We'll be focusing on these guys for a while, methinks.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.05.08 (17:21)

Boom.

Is... is that a face on view?
Yes, voice that apparently is reading this comic, it is.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.05.13 (20:06)

Do people just not comment in this forum any more?

Perfect place for a dramatic cut off... not that that means anything...
Also, I know Mark's speech looks awful, but it was more or less illegible otherwise. If you have other suggestions, let me know.

http://www.nmaps.net/user/numa_ninja · Postby **numa_ninja** » 2010.05.14 (09:18)

Although I personally find it hard to keep track of all of the characters, I still love where this is going. Don't stop!

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.05.16 (03:45)

@numa_ninja: Thanks - at this point, pretty much any feedback is comforting.
@all: here's a new one. HEY LOOK, A DRAMATIC CUT OFF. Astonishing.

So Cedric's personality is starting to develop a bit lately. Mostly in negative directions, but it's better than nothing.

http://www.nmaps.net/user/malde37 · Postby **Malde37** » 2010.05.19 (03:16)

Me Likey.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **Turiski** » 2010.05.27 (21:52)

I think I've said this before, but nobody wants to the the one saying NICE COMIC BRO after every one, so as long as you understand that it's easier not to get depressed.

Personally I like to read my comics in giant heaps, and I tend to not read threads for a month or two before coming back on and seeing the progress. At that point I like to post. So yes, I did just read the whole thing up to this point, and yes, it's pretty good.

Specific things:
Zayne's introduction was a bit overdramatic... but you followed it up well. If you were going for a guy who became absent-minded from bitterness, you nailed it.
I'm very confused about how the worlds that the two groups are in are related. Is the group with Cedric inside one of the worlds that the group with Zayne sees (or could hypothetically see if they looked for it)?
51 was excellent.
I don't really understand the mechanics behind 53.
I agree with numa_ninja: when this season is done you should get together a character sheet. If I can make suggestions, I wouldn't add bios. I think they're kind of distracting and take away from the character actually developed in the comic.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **DarkN** » 2010.05.28 (19:57)

Turiski wrote:Personally I like to read my comics in giant heaps, and I tend to not read threads for a month or two before coming back on and seeing the progress. At that point I like to post. So yes, I did just read the whole thing up to this point, and yes, it's pretty good.

Good to know; thanks.

Turiski wrote:I'm very confused about how the worlds that the two groups are in are related. Is the group with Cedric inside one of the worlds that the group with Zayne sees (or could hypothetically see if they looked for it)?

I probably should've explained that part better. The entirety of the comic takes place in one particular world, and yes, Cedric's group is in that world. (The levels and cities are all heaped together in one world, if that wasn't clear.) Zayne's group was supposed to be in between worlds during the last few comics.

Turiski wrote:51 was excellent.

Thanks; I wasn't sure how well I pulled that off.

Turiski wrote:I don't really understand the mechanics behind 53.

Yeah, I messed up on this front. The idea I was going for is that, being a drone, he doesn't have an "organic" mind and can't move that way.
...which sounds incredibly corny and stupid now that I say it out loud. Anyway, I intended to have that explained in later comics, but I probably should have addressed that earlier.

Turiski wrote:I agree with numa_ninja: when this season is done you should get together a character sheet.

I'll work on that.

http://www.nmaps.net/user/malde37 · Postby **Malde37** » 2010.06.11 (15:26)

Man, this comic is both trippy and deep. I love how you actually managed to put personalities in to your characters, regardless of how small. My kudos.

Postby **noobypro** » 2010.07.12 (02:54)

O_O I wonder how the thwumps will fare.

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