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Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.06 (21:08)
by Riobe
Down With The Sickness

Yes, even the title is a pun. This should be an enjoyable comic. It's my first, and it's supposed to be a random funny comic, and I may incorporate a storyline soon enough.

1: Self Imposed Love
2: Evolution
3: NReality Users These Days
4: Love In Bed
5: Genius
6: And More
7: Laser Pointers
8: Big Bone-ded
9: Above The Influence

Happy reading!

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.06 (21:10)
by Destiny
ROFL LEGEND CHICKEN

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.06 (21:12)
by Erik-Player
Now /that/ was funny. LOL

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.06 (21:17)
by Radium
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

lol.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.06 (23:12)
by wedgie
In the penultimate screen, shouldn't he be running towards the laptop?

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.07 (02:45)
by Radium
wedgie wrote:In the penultimate screen, shouldn't he be running towards the laptop?
Owned. Lol.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.07 (04:24)
by Riobe
Radium wrote:
wedgie wrote:In the penultimate screen, shouldn't he be running towards the laptop?
Owned. Lol.
Hehe, you got me. Thanks for the notice though, I'll edit it soon enough.

I also have another 2 comics, here they are:

1st titled: Evolution
2nd Titled: NReality Users These Days

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Note: The following would be funnier if you've encountered NReality before.
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Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.07 (04:30)
by Erik-Player
The first one was weird, but the second one was HILARIOUS! =D

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.07 (11:14)
by Lenny
Nice! I liked the first and second, and can empathise with the third (though not on the actual error).

Good job though - keep them going, and I hope to read more soon!

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Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.07 (20:52)
by Destiny
ROFL CHICKEN LEGEND

apart from the third. that wasnt as awesome.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.07 (20:57)
by Vyacheslav
Ahahah. These are awesome. I like.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.08 (00:32)
by Turiski
Well, neither were as amazing as #1 (I'm sure I'll have that opinion for quite a while)

Evolution was good.

NReality Users These Days, not so much. First, the title is awkward and doesn't really fit with the comic. The last panel was terrible, just while writing how I would have done it I came up with 3 others*. To clarify, I've played NReality and have some personal experience with that screen.
In the first panel, the man's text looks like... text. I talk to myself A LOT while at the computer, but I don't think I would say something like that out loud, because it's too square. Am I making sense?
The second panel has some issues, but they're more minor. More "text" speaking, and I think I would have taken a big number from speedrunning highscores and put that in place of 12 for ms/f. I'm not entirely sure if that's how it works but it would be one of those subtle things... actually, that might be too leading also... maybe not.


*now I can't decide :/

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.08 (01:07)
by Kablizzy
Aww, and this had so much potential, too.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.08 (01:31)
by Riobe
I try, I try. I appreciate the advice though (Turiski), and the comments.

That said, here's another one. I'll get around to updating the first post with links soon enough.

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Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.08 (09:10)
by Destiny
ahahaha - that's more like it :D

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.11 (23:06)
by Universezero
Turiski wrote:...but I don't think I would say something like that out loud, because it's too square.
That's what makes it so funny.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.17 (15:43)
by MattKestrel
Hi-Larryus.

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.17 (20:26)
by wumbla
VERY FUNNY....

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.19 (21:38)
by Rose
The first one and the last one were the best :P

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.19 (21:40)
by blackbelmoral
HILARIOUS
EVEN THOUGH IVE SEEN SIMILAR JOKES

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.24 (04:10)
by Riobe
I finally got around to making more comics!

Here's another two, hopefully you'll enjoy them.

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Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.24 (04:23)
by DoctorAperture
so it's not dead!! liked the first one, 2nd was okay

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.24 (23:04)
by Riobe
Thanks dude. :)

New comic!

Laser Pointers
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(Haha, laser pointers.)

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.24 (23:06)
by Darkandroid
laser pointers are fun and all, untill they're in your eye.
god they give me a head ache

Re: Down With The Stickness

Posted: 2009.01.25 (01:12)
by Yoshimo
Nice comic, love the comedy, like it doesn't try to much, but it gives you a good chuckle.