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I made a webcomic! :D

ROFL.
right drone: I want a...with chili oil
chaingun: ...

29403 wrote:I made a webcomic! :D

I don't understand it, but I like it.

[quote="SlappyMcGee]I don't understand it, but I like it.[/quote]

Me neither, but it's funny to see these enemies sitting in a bar I find the funniest thwump and a gauss turret.

appearently im not the only one confused Explain?

I think you have to read it in a particular way:



Also, I just had a big déjà vu moment, but I don't think I've done this before.

That's actually a significant improvement.

Aha, so that's how I make a good webcomic.

Any hints on how to make the comic a bit more understandable?

EDIT: Shit, I put the 2nd and 3rd panel the wrong way round, I'm such an idiot. =\ Let me fix it up now.

EDIT 2: Fixed, it should be better and easier to understand!

Hmm, drones ARE picky.
Include an n outside!

29403 wrote:Any hints on how to make the comic a bit more understandable?

Before every line write the number that represents the order of reading:

1. Hey, thanks for taking me to lunch!
2. No prob!


Next scene repeats from the beginning:

1. Are you that vague?
2. Erm, that's what everyone does...


It would make it all much better.

everythingfromatoz wrote:Hmm, drones ARE picky. Include an n outside!

No, do not include any ninjas.

29403, change nothing about this comic. It is a masterpiece of the absurd.

29403 wrote:Aha, so that's how I make a good webcomic.

Any hints on how to make the comic a bit more understandable?

Order the text vertically so that the first thing said in a panel is on top and the last is on the bottom.