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Going with a graphic comic style, which at the end of every episode i will compile into a .SWF
Cover:

Be warned, this is getting HUGE.

I went ahead and fullview'd that for you. Looking good!

The cover looks cool, though why episode one?

Cause Episode 0 was my 'test comics'.
But now I am starting out on Eps. 1

new page!

Anton: I woke up in a cell. >.<

Hahaha. I like the drawing style of his head. It's different, but in a good way.

Oh, wow, I haven't seen that approach taken before. Nice.

I agree, like the head. Although, at first I thought the normal head covering had fallen off, due to the black blob on the floor when he stands up.

golfkid wrote:I agree, like the head. Although, at first I thought the normal head covering had fallen off, due to the black blob on the floor when he stands up.

That is what's happened, though, isn't it? By this interpretation, the ninjas only wear the masks while "at work".

Yeah, that's his mask.
I thought that it was a good idea since I haven't seen anyone else do it.

Well, I love the art on his head, and I think it both makes perfect sense but is entirely unexpected for N to be wearing an outfit. Very cool.

Although, I would encourage you to do a couple of things revolving around the release.

1) Release 2-4 pages at a time. I understand wanting constant feedback, but posting one at a time won't help the plot.
2) Edit in all of your new pages to the first post as well as making new posts about them.
3) Reconsider .swf format at the end. Why not a .pdf?

SlappyMcGee wrote:Well, I love the art on his head, and I think it both makes perfect sense but is entirely unexpected for N to be wearing an outfit. Very cool.

Although, I would encourage you to do a couple of things revolving around the release.

1) Release 2-4 pages at a time. I understand wanting constant feedback, but posting one at a time won't help the plot.
2) Edit in all of your new pages to the first post as well as making new posts about them.
3) Reconsider .swf format at the end. Why not a .pdf?

Actually his name is Anton O. Trunen (AOT, while my initals are TOA)

1) yeah, i might do that considering i have up to page 12 on paper.
2) Knew there was something I was forgetting
3) Because I don't know if I can make a .pdf, and I like flash.

Okay, I have decided something.
I will use parts of the cast from the 'old' LoN.
That group will include:
Anton/Darkandroid (obviously) Ninja
Aleron/Animator (if he lets me.) Ninja
ZB-512 (Zoidberg) Drone
CY-940 (Cypher)/Condog (if he lets me.) Drone
OD-147 (Odysseus)/Sithmaster (if he lets me.) Drone
DS-217 (Dronescope)/Ingate (if he lets me.) Drone

Being lazy and only making one right now.

Anton: NO FACE FOR YOU!
DA: 'Scuse me while I brick Anton...
Anton: Fleeeeee!

by the way, i switched to photobucket so that I can enjoy them too!

this art is awesome, similar to ignates, but it has a personal twist. Story seems to be good, but we are only one in so... ill keep reading

Honestly, i read ingate's comic ONCE, ironically

Darkandroid wrote:DS-217 (Dronescope)/Ingate (if he lets me.) Drone

he requested a character in my old comic
and even MORE ironically
Dronescope's appearence was going to look close to symbois's look, minus the second eye and with a grey body.

Ingate's old quote wrote:Dronescope. A grey drone with an orange eye. Likes instant noodles and lava lamps. Dislikes lag.

These are quite good actually, just too fast at character introductions. And it needs more love triangles.

Sorry, but I had to leave you guys hanging while I make the next 2...

Anton: WEEEEE! ELEVATORS!!!!!
DA: >.< Shut up Anton.


also, check my other posts, you can now see what the cast members think!
and check back when new people are added!

okay...
so i also got the cast 'spoiler' updated.
thanks to the people who have the drop-down neditor nation badges!
you gave me my insperation!

Hahaha. Nice cliffhanger.

The last page is very funny.

Thanks guys.
I'm free on saturday so it might be a super comic update.

Anton: Oh guys I apologize for my earlier behavior, I found the Medicine Cabinet, and sampled a few things...
DA: More than a few...
Anton: Eh? What was that?
DA: Oh? Oh, nothing.

What's this?
A TRIPLE-COMIC UPDATE! Spoiler'd cause they take up sooo much space.
Anton: That door WAS huge!
DA: Heh, yeah, you almost !@#$ your pants.
Anton: ...

>.> totally not filler.

but it IS showing how LoN is going to change.
(NO, it does not include Portal.)

Hmm. I like the cliffhanger there.
That filler is, uh... filling nicely. :P

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Yeah, sorry 'bout the pixelation.
unless you guys like it.