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I've decided to make a web comic. I just wan't to make people laugh by pointing out the problems of N and mostly just screwing around with adobe fireworks.
Tell me any problems you have and what to fix.
By the way, the recent ones are much better than the old ones.

#1 Chicka http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1235576819

#2 Flying http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1235604706

#3 Telekinesis http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1235680702

#4 Strength http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1235691596

#5 Pink Predicament http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236223265

#6 Chicken http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236276774

#7 Kong http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236295375

#8 The Apperture Science Weighted Companion Cube http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236395031

#9 A New Hope http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236400334

#10 Wet floor http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236481668

#11 Trust Exercise http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1236481774

#12 The Hungry Lionhttp://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1237350717

#13 Goombahttp://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1244747805

#14 Hug of Doom http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1244672907

#15 Suicide Bomber http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1244684617

#16 JAWS http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1244745683

#17 Decoy http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1244781240

#18 Sign http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1244787038

#19 Angler Drone http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1246292977

#20 Poke http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1259249888

#21 Sacrifice http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1259460168

#22 Knock Knock http://i632.photobucket.com/albums/uu48 ... 1259463853

What?
Explain:

I have the same problems

I can see it.

I edited. Can everyone else see it?

Here's number two.
Tell me your likes and dislikes.

Hmm. I can see the first but not the second.

Edited and fixed.

the first one was cool... i like it when drones win :p

Second one got a little silly at the end, but it is reminecent of my first days playing N

keep up the good work ;)

Thank you.
Any ideas for my next one.

Okay, that's better.

The text was small in the first, but I see you fixed that. The jokes are okey, the first was very unique

I'm liking it so far



The next should have something with the ninja dying in an unusual way.

Hehehe. The first one was funny, and although I didn't think the second one was as funny, I like the way you worded it.

Same as lenny. but the second could have been better by having less yells and more humor.
3/5 ninjas



so far

Read and enjoy.
When will this ninja realize he does not have super powers.

hi, i was looking to make a webcomic, could someone please tell me how to get that much zoomed in so i can print screen and edit?

deltainferno: It's wierd when I use the fireworks on my mom's P.C. it make's the end product tiny like on my first post.
When I use my mac it makes it big. So I really have no idea.

BE_nSPIRED: I have a plan for his super powers.
*wink wink*

i have a question, how do you transfer images from n poser to fireworks/ editing software?

I have a screen capture program that allows me to capture my desired image from NReality.
Once I have the image you copy it and paste it into fireworks.
You would need to go searching for a image capture program if you do not already have one.
If you have any more questions could you please PM me.

When I get images from n poser, I just press print screen and paste it to paint, where I select the ninja for use in webcomics.

Tell me any problems you might have.
Here's the fourth.

Nphasis wrote:Tell me any problems you might have.
Here's the fourth.

Not bad.

Try something with Nreality.

first was a 4
rest were 3s...maybe a 2 for the second
it got cliched and repetitive imo
and I use Picasa for my comic
it works great

It's pretty cool, but telling the same joke three times on three different episodes isn't a good habit to get into.

Maybe I could make a few comics in between in the future before continuing stories like this?

You could do that but it's not really an answer to what GTM and ganteka were talking about. Actually, it is. I didn't read it correctly the first time.

In the last three comics you had the ninja randomly decide he had superpowers (that he didn't) and you killed him at the end. While I could see that melding into a storyline, pretty easily actually, it would need a bit of context outlined at the beginning to make it clear that the ninja was the same ninja every time, and a little more time between the power-death comics so the joke doesn't get repetitive.

If you did intend for these three to be a story, you probably should have explained that when you wrote the first one (in the series), or before you posted the second one (along the lines of: "I'm sort of liking this idea, I'm going to go on with the whole superpowers thing for a while"). In the meantime you could update your second comic's (the first in the series) post so that new readers understand.