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I just tried to make few comics, first I tried to get some ideas, and then I skipped to realization. I'll try to publish one per week, but that depends on my inspiration. I won't keep the storyline, but that doesn't mean I won't decide to change that. I have two of them finished right now.

COMIC #01

Numbers before sentences mark the order of reading;
This comic is just me trying to come in handy with the tools I'm going to use, I didn't keep the focus on quality of the comic;
It was released yesterday on The One-Shot Thread, so there's a possibility you've seen it before (I deleted it from that thread before making this one);

it was... interesting

The wrtiting could be improved, and it wasnt really necesary for each pannel to be a full screenshot

I am going to wait for more until i start trolling though, keep it up!

it was good.
liked most of it.
but make sure to downsize it.
just like ap said.

Yeah, I'm all for downsizing so it fits nicely, and maybe use of the img tag, but otherwise it was good.

Pretty good, just work on writing and downsize it a bit, add borders, and it could turn out great!

Oh, I forgot that I have put two comics on the One-Shot Thread, so this is the second one. Also, the next one is going to be downsized, I promise ;).

Comic #02

Comic #03

Comic #04

You should work on your presentation, grammar, spelling, plot/jokes and layout.

Not very good. Better than Land of Rape and Honey, though.

Mmm. What you're writing aside, I'm frustrated by having to find numbers in order to properly derive how to read your comic. Learn how to place text in such a way that it's easy for the narrative to flow.

For instance, in that last comic, move the text (1.) over top of the two, and extend the line coming from the ninja.

Next comic will probably come with delay, I overpassed my internet limit (8GB), so my speed fell down to 64kbps, or 32kbps when I turn my second computer on, so it's a pain when I'm upload anything. Thanks god that I didn't hook up my third comp, it would be 16kbps :-)

I agree with Slappy for once

My account has been reseted, finally. Anyway, this is the last month with this 8GB/512 kbps service, my provider is making everything better by putting it to 12GB/768kbps at the same price.

Comic #05

EdoI wrote:My account has been reseted, finally. Anyway, this is the last month with this 8GB/512 kbps service, my provider is making everything better by putting it to 12GB/768kbps at the same price.

Comic #05

TWELVE GB/sec?
I'm getting 200kbps down and like 20 up

Nice comics,these are the ones you probably spend a little time,but they are good.

lord_day wrote:You should work on your presentation, grammar, spelling, plot/jokes and layout.

I mean not that good but , if you work more on it,it'll look great.

bhz wrote:

EdoI wrote:My account has been reseted, finally. Anyway, this is the last month with this 8GB/512 kbps service, my provider is making everything better by putting it to 12GB/768kbps at the same price.

Comic #05

TWELVE GB/sec?
I'm getting 200kbps down and like 20 up

Hell no! At the moment my download speed is 512kbps, and it will be 768kbps. THE LIMIT at the moment is 8GB, and it will be 12GB.
Limit - you know, if your upload+download is bigger than your limit, they can turn your account off, let you go with the same speed but they charge you more or, like in my case, decrease your download speed (they decrease my speed to 64kbps).

This is a good one.

Comic #06

Liked it, you need to update more often.

Gah. Do what Slappy said. It's incredibly irritating the way you number those things. I usually don't notice the numbers, so I read what should be logically the first line, i.e. the top one, first, only to notice afterward I'm supposed to read it backwards. That's completely imbecilic. Stop it.

gloomp wrote:Gah. Do what Slappy said. It's incredibly irritating the way you number those things. I usually don't notice the numbers, so I read what should be logically the first line, i.e. the top one, first, only to notice afterward I'm supposed to read it backwards. That's completely imbecilic. Stop it.

Every comic except the first and fourth were from top to bottom.

EdoI wrote:

gloomp wrote:Gah. Do what Slappy said. It's incredibly irritating the way you number those things. I usually don't notice the numbers, so I read what should be logically the first line, i.e. the top one, first, only to notice afterward I'm supposed to read it backwards. That's completely imbecilic. Stop it.

Every comic except the first and fourth were from top to bottom.

And six. Panel three.

The last one is... unusual... but it's ok.