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Anyways, me and Tweak had a chat yesterday/two days ago, and he convinced me to make a comic.

EDIT: He's just thinking, not really talking.


My first ever comic, so don't be /too/ harsh.

Anyways, Ragnarok actually measn 'Death of the Gods' (or something like that), so you can expect what's going to happen.

/me likes.
May I make a few suggestions?
The walking ninjas: have them bent forward a little.
Also, the dialogue seemed off; I think it would have been better if he was talking to a friend or something.
This is just a little thing, but the door should have been open when they were leaving.
Other than those things, it's pretty good, especially for a first comic. I'd like to see where this goes.

DarkN wrote:/me likes.
May I make a few suggestions?
The walking ninjas: have them bent forward a little.
Also, the dialogue seemed off; I think it would have been better if he was talking to a friend or something.
This is just a little thing, but the door should have been open when they were leaving.
Other than those things, it's pretty good, especially for a first comic. I'd like to see where this goes.

I forgot to mention, he's just thinking right now.

Ah. It would be good to put in, say, asterisks or italics to indicate his thinking-ness. In the future.

Can't... Get... Over... Epicness... Lack of anti heroeness forgiven...

Personally, I think I would have left it at "But...", however I enjoyed the sense of foreboding and the idea of a plot that this will have.

Weisslenny0 wrote:Personally, I think I would have left it at "But...", however I enjoyed the sense of foreboding and the idea of a plot that this will have.

Seconded.

Also,this comic is not usual as other. It's different in some ways I can't explain at the moment.

Judging by the title, this is going to be epic. I hope you execute the epic-ness well.

I didn't think 3 panels and 6 lines of text would be so epic. '-_-

Looks like I'm going to have to work hard to make it even better.

And updating more often!

*discards the hypocrite card*

But yeah, please keep doing this.

I second that notion. This looks insanely awesome. If I didn't say that before, I'm saying it now.