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I am going to try to renew this as best I can. Expect updates about twice a week, shooting for Tuesdays and Thursdays. Starting from the beginning, so enjoy!

Page One:

I spy a few grammatical errors. Other than that, looks good.

Despite the relatively cliched start, i like this so far. It has a lot of potential.

coo'

Nice Comic

But on page two your wrote page three

I find the background annoying. It does to the comic what a vacuum cleaner does to that tiny Jade earring your significant other likes so much that the cat knocked on the floor an hour ago. It sucks me right out of it AND I KNOW THE ANALOGY DOESN'T REALLY MAKE SENSE BUT IT TOOK ME FOREVER TO COME UP WITH SO DEAL WITH IT MADE SENSE AT THE TIME.

I'm really enjoying this so far.

It's great to see that even though this is the second time I read it, it's still amazing.

that's awsome, i want more,



yet what does "graphic novel" mean?

isaacx wrote:yet what does "graphic novel" mean?

/me runs away

Captain Weasle, this is great.

That last one is completely epic. I can't wait for more.

Thanks! Also, the next page will start with some actual dialogue, so get ready from some plot madness.

Izzy wrote:

isaacx wrote:yet what does "graphic novel" mean?

/me runs away

Captain Weasle, this is great.

and i still don't know what it means

EDIT<below>

*checksed wikipedia*
*found nothing*

so what does it mean?

You couldn't have done a very good job of checksing Wikipedia:

"A graphic novel is a type of comic book, usually with a lengthy and complex storyline similar to those of novels, and often aimed at mature audiences."

Oh sorry I forgot to update the title. New page is up.

Still amazing. Out of curiosity, have you started drawing on your end?

Turiski wrote:Still amazing. Out of curiosity, have you started drawing on your end?

What do you mean?

Nice, but you should watch your spelling....

Yeah I need to update the pages. I made them a while ago.