GTM's Musings on the World of N

[MattKestrel]

Chapter 7
Revenge Begins At Home



Okay, this has actually got a storyline going now :S Also, change in border colour. Looks cool/confusing?

[Turiski]

Hm...

The font suggests the ninja is speaking for the majority of the comic, but the words suggest it's the floorguard (that is, the ninja says "Dude, get over yourself..."). I like the latter better, but there's six comics of solid evidence that say it's the other way around.

*confused*

Edit: Oh, but the format is good. I'm in favor of the way it is right now

[MattKestrel]

Chapter 8
The Arrogance Continues



Heh, I won't reveal the justification behind N's sudden change of character for a while... I have a spoiler and I'm clinging to it like a parasite. Also, I'm not sure whether this format works better or not. I think it does, but idk. Might switch back and forth if I feel like it.

[Kablamo]

I like the talking on the actual panels better than on seperate ones

[aapse]

disagree. looks nicer in seperate panels and its easier to follow. not so cluttered, like in the one before.

as for the one before, it was too hard to follow, would've been better with the text near whoever was talking. as turiski said, a bit confusing.

but whatever, i like dry humour.

[MattKestrel]

Heh, as I said I'll probably try a mix of both in the future. Watch this space :)

[Drathmoore]

Pretty good, the last one's the best in my opinion, and sounds oddly enough like Xbox live...

*Shrugs Sholders*


The first comic, that skull dragon wasn't one of your sister's drawings, was it? And oddly enough it reminded me a lot of Stallord, but I doubt you've played Twilight Princess.

[MattKestrel]

No, it's just a cool image I managed to google. Back before the days of using deviantart, Christ... :P And that was intentional in the last comic, Shaun :P Anyways, new comic time. I've been trying not to make it stale, has it worked? Might thicken the borders next time around :/ Also, I tried doing a little bit of both text placement, and I think it works pretty well. Comments?

Chapter 9
Reverse-Psychology

[aapse]

aha, nice.

'tis getting a bit stale though. need some new humour.

[Superpok]

yeah, agreed...

[MattKestrel]

Chapter 10
Mush Room For Exposition



Have no idea where to take it from here, which is good. :)

[deltainferno]

pennultimate episode was VERY confusing.

the last one lacked artistic flare but still retains 'immature' humour. which I like :P

[shiprelation_]

Funny :P

[MattKestrel]

Chapter 11
With Friends Like These...

[Tunco]

Chapter 11
With Friends Like These...

I'm glad that you continued this.
But you might want to make them more interesting, like the other good ones when you started to make it.

[MattKestrel]

Tunco, it's either called subtlety or excuses ^_^

[Tunco]

Tunco, it's either called subtlety or excuses ^_^

That was only a suggestion, Gtm. :/

[MattKestrel]

Chapter 12
Reality Sucks: Redux



Sorry Tunco. I've yet to decide whether I should sacrifice a plot and characters to get rid of this postmodern crap I've got going on :P

Incidentally, now that the comic's following a storyline, I've changed the title to that of the plotline.

[Drathmoore]

Is the poll over? Best tree design?

The punchline is alright. It's not strong enough though.

Maybe pink isn't noobish enough...


Time to make a parody!

[MattKestrel]

Aha, that poll was over years ago. I think I'm going to conclude this arc and start over, with a more defined plot and setting. Drathmoore, I'd be honoured if you'd help with the script, and maybe do a few cameos :)

[Tunco]

Aha, that poll was over years ago. I think I'm going to conclude this arc and start over, with a more defined plot and setting. Drathmoore, I'd be honoured if you'd help with the script, and maybe do a few cameos :)

What about a comic made by you and Drathmoore, comic collab. It would be nice though, but your techniques and drawing types are different.

[MattKestrel]

Aha, that poll was over years ago. I think I'm going to conclude this arc and start over, with a more defined plot and setting. Drathmoore, I'd be honoured if you'd help with the script, and maybe do a few cameos :)

What about a comic made by you and Drathmoore, comic collab. It would be nice though, but your techniques and drawing types are different.

Mmmyeah. That sounds great. I'll talk to him about everything, and maybe we could use it as the nnn's featured webcomic?

[Tunco]

Aha, that poll was over years ago. I think I'm going to conclude this arc and start over, with a more defined plot and setting. Drathmoore, I'd be honoured if you'd help with the script, and maybe do a few cameos :)

What about a comic made by you and Drathmoore, comic collab. It would be nice though, but your techniques and drawing types are different.

Mmmyeah. That sounds great. I'll talk to him about everything, and maybe we could use it as the nnn's featured webcomic?

Yes, yes, yes!

We could do a poll.

[Drathmoore]

You can see my views of this idea by checking out [plug]my webcomic[/plug].

Sounds like a good idea. Noob meets Cynical Psycopath?

[MattKestrel]

Chapter 13
Finalé



As of now, this disjointed comic's pretty much over. I'll start up the new storyline on a new thread, since I don't really think I should be thrusting these shorts in anyone's faces. that said, I might still make some shorts based on the old premise. Idk.

Anyways, thanks Drathmoore. I hope we can both polish off the new story arc.

Credit to Capt_Weasle for the final image.