Postby Turiski » 2009.04.17 (04:40)
*adjusts monocles*
*looks at comic*
*looks at name next to comic*
*looks back at comic*
*looks at comic #1*
*looks at name next to comic #1*
*looks at name next to new comic*
Wow.
That was a bit of an improvement.
Very good job.
(No sarcasm intended)
Of course, I have to ***** about something, but these are much more minor:
- If you're going to do squarish text-bubbles (which I absolutely don't object to), I think there's a tool that lets you make just squares, so that the lines won't be broken up at some arbitrary pixel so that it can make the slight slope you probably unintentionally asked it to. If you can find it, use it, and see if you can round the corners *just* a little.
- Put the "..." above the ninja, or remove it. Both are valid options, but I don't really care for what you did there.
- I'm still not a fan of you just tossing that drone around like it's nothing.
- And now for the hypocrite card: Try and make the poses match the ninjas' words & tone.
As for the humor: I didn't care for it, but then again I think if you keep making these I'll like some of them.
Seriously, though, lolzorz. I'm impressed.
Oh, side note: this is a particularly bad time to be posting comics because for some reason the webcomics forum just died. Even SBoC is having troubles, and it was totally the hot item about four weeks ago. So if nobody posts, it's not because we hate your comic or think you're hopeless. There's just not a lot of activity here recently.
Other Project
Soon as in later. Probably post-December. However, aperture and I are in contact, so rest assured we are at least thinking about it.
