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http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2008.12.16 (01:51)

Hello, and welcome to my comic series. I'll try to update this at least once a week, although I can't make any promises. Also, I'd really appreaciate any constructive criticism you guys have to offer. Enjoy!

Comic #1: "Typical Boredom"

http://nmaps.net/user/TribulatioN · Postby **TribulatioN** » 2008.12.16 (02:15)

Okay, since I don't know the storyline, I won't critique that yet, as it could go either way right now, but image wise, I'd recommend not using the white boxes for your text, and either sticking to the grey background, or come up with something better for a text box. I like the random comic panels, maybe just clean it up a bit, while still having the random effect.

There's not much else I can add since there isn't really anything to show exactly what you're capable of, so I'll wait.

http://nmaps.net/user/RedSham · Postby **RedSham** » 2008.12.16 (23:07)

I agree about the white boxes. Also, .PNG is a nicer file format for larger areas of color.

http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2008.12.23 (20:05)

Thabks for the feedback. RedSham, I'll do the next one in .png, I saw your post after I finished.

Comic #2: "Scaling the Apartment"

http://nmaps.net/user/29403 · Postby **29403** » 2008.12.24 (15:59)

Good, I enjoyed them.

Perhaps use imageshack.us so we don't have to click the comic to resize it.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **Turiski** » 2008.12.24 (18:44)

Number 2 is infinitely better than Number 1.

I will now follow this. :)

http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2008.12.24 (19:47)

Turiski wrote:Number 2 is infinitely better than Number 1.

I will now follow this. :)

Any particular reason? Like the Muse referance? Or the huge gold-laser thing?
Thanks for following, but I'm going to be gone for a while during winter break so it could be a while untill the next update.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **Turiski** » 2008.12.27 (02:21)

It's the technical stuff, really. It's readable, and the joke is better (though that's more subjective).

It wasn't the lazer thing, unfortunately. Special effects usually make me leery and that wasn't much of an exception.

http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2009.01.07 (02:51)

Sorry for the lack of updates. But, I have #3!

Comic #3: "Introducing the Villain."

Also, If any one has any suggestions for the Black Ninja's name, the strip's title, the drone's name, or really just names in general, I'd like to hear them.

Postby **Lenny** » 2009.01.07 (11:18)

Nice! I like the effects that you're using - and yeah, png is definitely much more efficient for the images.

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http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2009.01.24 (19:53)

# 4 has arrived!
Comic #4: "Preparations"

Comments and suggestions are welcome!

http://nmaps.net/user/DarkandroidLoN · Postby **Darkandroid** » 2009.01.24 (19:59)

I don't know wether to kill you, or praise the ground you walk on.
cause i luuuuuurve cave story!

http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2009.01.24 (20:06)

Darkandroid wrote:I don't know wether to kill you, or praise the ground you walk on.
cause i luuuuuurve cave story!

I'd perfer if you did the second one.

I downloaded Cave Story a couple weeks ago, and it's awesome! Right now I'm at

Easy route spoiler!

Egg corridor, right after the dragons hatch, on my first playthrough. It's amazing how different it looks!

http://nmaps.net/user/29403 · Postby **29403** » 2009.01.24 (20:08)

As I said, it's better if you upload them on www.imageshack.us or www.tinypic.com so we don't have to click on them to read them.
But anyway, nice comics!

http://nmaps.net/user/Leaff · Postby **Leaff** » 2009.01.24 (20:54)

29403 wrote:As I said, it's better if you upload them on http://www.imageshack.us or http://www.tinypic.com so we don't have to click on them to read them.
But anyway, nice comics!

Just finished doing it. And I agree now, it looks way better this way. Thanks!

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