Down With The Stickness

http://nmaps.net/user/Riobe · Postby **Riobe** » 2009.01.06 (21:08)

Down With The Sickness

Yes, even the title is a pun. This should be an enjoyable comic. It's my first, and it's supposed to be a random funny comic, and I may incorporate a storyline soon enough.

1: Self Imposed Love
2: Evolution
3: NReality Users These Days
4: Love In Bed
5: Genius
6: And More
7: Laser Pointers
8: Big Bone-ded
9: Above The Influence

Happy reading!

http://nmaps.net/user/_destiny%5E%2D · Postby **Destiny** » 2009.01.06 (21:10)

ROFL LEGEND CHICKEN

http://nmaps.net/user/Erik-Player · Postby **Erik-Player** » 2009.01.06 (21:12)

Now /that/ was funny. LOL

http://nmaps.net/user/RadiumFalcon · Postby **Radium** » 2009.01.06 (21:17)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

lol.

http://nmaps.net/user/wedgie123 · Postby **wedgie** » 2009.01.06 (23:12)

In the penultimate screen, shouldn't he be running towards the laptop?

http://nmaps.net/user/RadiumFalcon · Postby **Radium** » 2009.01.07 (02:45)

wedgie wrote:In the penultimate screen, shouldn't he be running towards the laptop?

Owned. Lol.

http://nmaps.net/user/Riobe · Postby **Riobe** » 2009.01.07 (04:24)

Radium wrote:
wedgie wrote:In the penultimate screen, shouldn't he be running towards the laptop?
Owned. Lol.

Hehe, you got me. Thanks for the notice though, I'll edit it soon enough.

I also have another 2 comics, here they are:

1st titled: Evolution
2nd Titled: NReality Users These Days

Note: The following would be funnier if you've encountered NReality before.

http://nmaps.net/user/Erik-Player · Postby **Erik-Player** » 2009.01.07 (04:30)

The first one was weird, but the second one was HILARIOUS! =D

Postby **Lenny** » 2009.01.07 (11:14)

Nice! I liked the first and second, and can empathise with the third (though not on the actual error).

Good job though - keep them going, and I hope to read more soon!

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Now playing: Brahms - Hungarian Dance no. 5
via FoxyTunes

http://nmaps.net/user/_destiny%5E%2D · Postby **Destiny** » 2009.01.07 (20:52)

ROFL CHICKEN LEGEND

apart from the third. that wasnt as awesome.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **Vyacheslav** » 2009.01.07 (20:57)

Ahahah. These are awesome. I like.

http://nmaps.net/user/ · Postby **Turiski** » 2009.01.08 (00:32)

Well, neither were as amazing as #1 (I'm sure I'll have that opinion for quite a while)

Evolution was good.

NReality Users These Days, not so much. First, the title is awkward and doesn't really fit with the comic. The last panel was terrible, just while writing how I would have done it I came up with 3 others*. To clarify, I've played NReality and have some personal experience with that screen.
In the first panel, the man's text looks like... text. I talk to myself A LOT while at the computer, but I don't think I would say something like that out loud, because it's too square. Am I making sense?
The second panel has some issues, but they're more minor. More "text" speaking, and I think I would have taken a big number from speedrunning highscores and put that in place of 12 for ms/f. I'm not entirely sure if that's how it works but it would be one of those subtle things... actually, that might be too leading also... maybe not.

*now I can't decide :/

http://www.nmaps.net/user/Kablizzy · Postby **Kablizzy** » 2009.01.08 (01:07)

Aww, and this had so much potential, too.

http://nmaps.net/user/Riobe · Postby **Riobe** » 2009.01.08 (01:31)

I try, I try. I appreciate the advice though (Turiski), and the comments.

That said, here's another one. I'll get around to updating the first post with links soon enough.

http://nmaps.net/user/_destiny%5E%2D · Postby **Destiny** » 2009.01.08 (09:10)

ahahaha - that's more like it :D

http://nmaps.net/user/UniverseZero · Postby **Universezero** » 2009.01.11 (23:06)

Turiski wrote:...but I don't think I would say something like that out loud, because it's too square.

That's what makes it so funny.

http://nmaps.net/user/Guitar_Hero_Matt · Postby **MattKestrel** » 2009.01.17 (15:43)

Hi-Larryus.

http://nmaps.net/user/wumbla · Postby **wumbla** » 2009.01.17 (20:26)

VERY FUNNY....

http://nmaps.net/user/maxson924 · Postby **Rose** » 2009.01.19 (21:38)

The first one and the last one were the best :P

http://nmaps.net/user/greenblack · Postby **blackbelmoral** » 2009.01.19 (21:40)

HILARIOUS
EVEN THOUGH IVE SEEN SIMILAR JOKES

http://nmaps.net/user/Riobe · Postby **Riobe** » 2009.01.24 (04:10)

I finally got around to making more comics!

Here's another two, hopefully you'll enjoy them.

http://nmaps.net/user/Eternal_Boredom · Postby **DoctorAperture** » 2009.01.24 (04:23)

so it's not dead!! liked the first one, 2nd was okay

http://nmaps.net/user/Riobe · Postby **Riobe** » 2009.01.24 (23:04)

Thanks dude. :)

New comic!

Laser Pointers

(Haha, laser pointers.)

http://nmaps.net/user/DarkandroidLoN · Postby **Darkandroid** » 2009.01.24 (23:06)

laser pointers are fun and all, untill they're in your eye.
god they give me a head ache

http://nmaps.net/user/BionicCryonic · Postby **Yoshimo** » 2009.01.25 (01:12)

Nice comic, love the comedy, like it doesn't try to much, but it gives you a good chuckle.

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