The Way of the Ninja

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Postby Amadeus » 2009.02.16 (02:00)

I have set out to make a webcomic. Enjoy.
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Falling. Eternally...
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Crap!
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What now?
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Marriage. Gone Wrong.
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People write to me and say, "I’m giving up, you’re not talking to me." I just write them a simple message like, "Never give up," you know? And it changes their life
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Postby Hoohah2x2sday » 2009.02.16 (02:22)

haha, i like the first and last ones =]

id try to make them longer, and maybe use different things than drones, though im sure you're planning on that =D

EDIT: maybe you should make like a series of comics, where they all realte to each other? just a thought
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Postby Amadeus » 2009.02.16 (02:38)

Thanks for the advice
I don't think I'm going to get a storyline until I get the hang of this, but I'll try and branch out from drones
Until then...
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Drones SUCK!
People write to me and say, "I’m giving up, you’re not talking to me." I just write them a simple message like, "Never give up," you know? And it changes their life
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Postby Leaff » 2009.02.16 (03:10)

One Two pieces of advice: save them as png instead of jpeg, and upload them to http://www.tinypic.com or another image hosting site. Other than that, I'd try to make them a bit longer.
Oh, and this will really help with the ninja.
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Postby Turiski » 2009.02.16 (05:11)

The fourth one didn't make sense, but i've definitely fallen for the second one before :(

Oh, but yeah, .png unless you start uploading RL photos. It's the best format for pics with large areas of color, and since we have a larger (nonexistant?) limit on attachments. Speaking of attachments, if you're not morally opposed to using an image hosting site *blatant reference to self* then I'd use one. Photobucket is good. So is tinypic, but in Photobucket you get an account which may or may not give your pictures more longevity.

Finally, I say one-panels are fine. Multi-panels are obviously better for storylines, but I'd really only use them for "random" jokes if person A speaks, person B speaks, and then person A speaks again. Or if I needed a beat panel. The triple dot usually doesn't cut it for me.
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Postby Amadeus » 2009.02.16 (08:02)

Well heres a png
I'm not going to bother with tinypics unless a huge demand arises

EDIT: the fourth one is supposed to be a wedding
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Postby aapse » 2009.02.16 (08:19)

i lol at the first one.
very good.
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Postby Amadeus » 2009.02.16 (08:23)

Thanks
If I develop this enough and work at it, I may have a shot at Dronies I think.
But it'll take time
Heres another
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People write to me and say, "I’m giving up, you’re not talking to me." I just write them a simple message like, "Never give up," you know? And it changes their life
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Postby Lenny » 2009.02.16 (09:37)

Mikey_Ninja wrote:One Two pieces of advice: save them as png instead of jpeg, and upload them to http://www.tinypic.com or another image hosting site. Other than that, I'd try to make them a bit longer.
Oh, and this will really help with the ninja.
I was going to saw mostly that. I like Photobucket.com, but it doesn't really matter where you host them.
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Postby Izzy » 2009.02.16 (13:48)

The name is very original.
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Postby Amadeus » 2009.02.18 (03:52)

o_O
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People write to me and say, "I’m giving up, you’re not talking to me." I just write them a simple message like, "Never give up," you know? And it changes their life
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Postby Leaff » 2009.02.19 (21:16)

I like the most recent one, especially the way you're doing pannel borders. But the big empty space on the right is kind of... distracting, I guess. Otherwise, nice job.
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Postby Darkandroid » 2009.02.20 (02:42)

make it SMALLER
i hate scrolling in all directions to read things.
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Postby Amadeus » 2009.02.28 (08:05)

New 'un
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Postby SlappyMcGee » 2009.03.01 (20:53)

*closed*
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