A new webcomic, hoping to get some constructive criticisms here; I'll see how I go.
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The Life of the All-Hated Machines [April 21!]
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Last edited by Universezero on 2009.04.21 (04:12), edited 6 times in total.
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Red headed asain midget?
oook...
I must say that is a good intro comic :D
oook...
I must say that is a good intro comic :D
Hi Everybody!
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Excellent comic. A masterful stroke of absurdism and fantastic art.
Phoque of approval to you, sir.
Phoque of approval to you, sir.
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:DSlappyMcGee wrote:Excellent comic. A masterful stroke of absurdism and fantastic art.
Phoque of approval to you, sir.
Thanks.
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Thats great
one of the few funny comics on the web...most are bad, including my own
one of the few funny comics on the web...most are bad, including my own
http://greenbrown.bandcamp.comPeople write to me and say, "I’m giving up, you’re not talking to me." I just write them a simple message like, "Never give up," you know? And it changes their life
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Heh. I like the second one. That's a cool yellow drone.
And the humour in the first was good, too.
And the humour in the first was good, too.
<&Yanni> I've had an ambient song like this playing for a couple hours,
<&Yanni> Oh no wait that is MY AIR CONDITIONER
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<@Animator> :::: Techno was killed by a better music genre.
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<SouthyMcGee> Music is auditory art. What art is a different argument.
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<&sforzando> Alright, no 247MHz for you.
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Pretty good if I may say so myself!
^made by Life247^
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A Small Bit of Code (Tweak), The Great Nation of Hispanyanlandia (OneSevenNine), The Land of Rape and Honey (87654321), Don (COMMET), Omega (COMMET), N: The Legacy (DarkN), U (Drathmoore), and My zombified-webcomic-which-needs-a-name (Wannas)
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Coming Soon
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Thanks for the comments guys!
Update:
Don't, worry, there will be a plot. ;)
Update:
Don't, worry, there will be a plot. ;)
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The laser drone is Tanner, that much is obvious. But the chaingun drone doesn`t look good jewish enough to be Sharon.
Still, I can`t believe how nice you make these N comics look.
Still, I can`t believe how nice you make these N comics look.
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Very Good.
^made by Life247^
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A Small Bit of Code (Tweak), The Great Nation of Hispanyanlandia (OneSevenNine), The Land of Rape and Honey (87654321), Don (COMMET), Omega (COMMET), N: The Legacy (DarkN), U (Drathmoore), and My zombified-webcomic-which-needs-a-name (Wannas)
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[Old Forums: 341 (0.07% of total forum posts)]"My parents thinks I incredibly smart and has lots of expectations from me." -Tunco
Coming Soon
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Yeah, that was pretty sweet. If you're going into a plot though, you might want to add specific things to some characters, like a funny hat, colours... or something unique. Not needed, but just an idea.
<&Yanni> I've had an ambient song like this playing for a couple hours,
<&Yanni> Oh no wait that is MY AIR CONDITIONER
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<@Animator> :::: Techno was killed by a better music genre.
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<&sforzando> Alright, no 247MHz for you.
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Update! Yay!
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the characters meet! I hope you update more often.
the characters meet! I hope you update more often.
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He's updating at an excellent rate, considering.
Keep up the ace work.
Keep up the ace work.
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THE PLOT THICKENS.
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[Old Forums: 341 (0.07% of total forum posts)]"My parents thinks I incredibly smart and has lots of expectations from me." -Tunco
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Finally! An update.
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FINALLY! I got time to update!
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I thought it was a little wierd at first, but by the spirit of D I was already hooked, MAKE MOAR!!!!
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Orange- N cannot be spoken, or even thought about in my household. If my parents ever found out that I have played N since the cleansing, my life would be ruined. I keep the game in a multi-passworded .rar on a USB flash drive inside a locked boron alloy container that requires two keys to open (I keep one under the 64th hammer in my piano, and the other one in a small section of removable ceiling in the corner of the attic) hidden in a wall compartment lined with aluminium foil to prevent sonar detection behind my 375 kg cupboard, which is bolted to the floor - the only way to reach it is to abseil outside the fourth floor window and use a screwdriver to unfasten the screws holding the secret brick in place on the opposite side of the wall, but the screwdriver must be a specific type like the one I own, since if any other screwdriver comes into contact with the screws, the entire building will explode, as will a seperate charge placed inside the boron alloy container, rendering the USB useless. Even once the container is retrieved, attemping to open it without the arming pin in place (which is kept inside the battery compartment of my Maglite) will cause the water reservoirs lining the container to burst and react with the caesium lining, causing the container to burst into flames - the only way to prevent this is to use the arming pins to shut off the reservoirs with a sliding steel door. The USB itself contains an accelerometer linked to an explosive charge, meaning that if the USB detects its own movement speed as being greater than 5 cm/s, it will explode - any person attempting to steal it would have to move at a uselessly slow speed. Once plugged into a computer, the USB will upload a ghost virus onto it, leaving no traces. Only the right password can deactivate this virus, and if it is left on the computer for more than six hours, it will format all drives.
As you can see, I take my N playing very seriously.
Guiseppi- I'd much rather watch animals get boned in the ass.
Yanni- If it's glad, it's not rape.
Tsukatu- I refuse to use throw-away bags for such a frequent purpose as buying groceries. Instead, I've collected the hair of my two pet dogs and have woven them together into an all-natural, 100% environmentally friendly bag that I bring with me everywhere. And when I buy products that come in glass and plastic containers, I track down the company that packages them and ship back their containers so that they don't take up space in landfills.
Yeah, I use plastic.
Tsukatu- I hear Ebony Online is great, too. Cum save your princess, my lord!
Ska- UR MUM LIKE IS SPICY
Ska- why d i get the feeling what i typed will end up in the quote depository; or worse: someone's sig.
KinGAleX- I did it on the couch a little while ago.
Zeph- I got too pissed at the knife in the end so I just broke the wood on my knee
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[13:50:53] <Zeph> omfg 1950s jazz 
[13:50:57] <WorldCupE> ZEPH
[13:51:01] <WorldCupE> WHAT
[13:51:11] <WorldCupE> hpw
[13:51:12] <WorldCupE> how
[13:51:12] <Zeph> everyone wears out halfway through the match
[13:51:15] <WorldCupE> ._.
[13:51:17] <WorldCupE> you
[13:51:19] <WorldCupE> aren't
[13:51:20] <WorldCupE> here
[13:51:24] <WorldCupikaze> I think the broadcasters lowered the volume for certain frequencies
[13:51:35] <WorldCupikaze> WOAH
[13:51:38] <WorldCupikaze> STOP IT ZEPH
[13:51:46] <WorldCupE> he's in #n
[13:51:49] <WorldCupE> but not here
[13:51:58] <Zeph> that nz guy wasn't fouled
[13:52:05] <WorldCupikaze> DUBBLE YOO. TEE. EFF.
[13:52:05] <WorldCupikaze> STOPIT
[13:52:29] <WorldCupE> I don't think Zeph can read what we say
[13:52:38] <WorldCupikaze> No
[13:52:41] <WorldCupikaze> But it still happens
[13:52:46] <WorldCupE> xD
[13:52:47] <Zeph> holy shot I'm vibrating to 1950s relaxing jazz
[13:52:58] <WorldCupE> ZEPH
[13:53:01] <WorldCupE> CAN YOYU HEAR ME
[13:53:20] <WorldCupE> donfuy
[13:53:23] <WorldCupE> have you seen this
[13:53:35] <Donfuy> i can't
[13:53:43] <WorldCupE> can't what
[13:53:47] <WorldCupE> Zeph isn't here
[13:53:48] <WorldCupikaze> WHAT's GOING ON
[13:53:51] <WorldCupE> but is speaking
[13:53:51] <WorldCupE> D:
[13:53:58] <Donfuy> can't see what huh?
[13:54:06] <WorldCupikaze> IT'S THE APOCALYPSE
[13:54:10] <Donfuy> where's zeph o_o
[13:54:18] <WorldCupE> precisely
[13:54:21] <WorldCupikaze> Exactly
[13:55:21] <WorldCupikaze> call wide
[13:55:24] <Zeph> Pooh
[13:55:28] <WorldCupikaze> EH?
[13:55:37] <WorldCupikaze> OOOOOOOOoh
[13:55:38] <Zeph> amazing slide tackle saves day
[13:55:48] <WorldCupikaze> WHY ARE YOU TALKING YOU AREN'T HERE
[13:56:53] <WorldCupikaze> call wide
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[13:32:43] <WorldCupE> ZEPH D:<
[13:32:44] <Zeph> fucking irc app
[13:32:47] <WorldCupE> O_O
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I really like the D drone and the robot N frame, but the punchline was kinda lame.
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HAHAHAHA!!
how did I miss this for two and a half weeks? Oh man... I could see where the punchline might not be that funny but there's this kid at my school who talks EXACTLY like that all the time and I could completely hear his voice, "you don't mess with the D, man!"
wow.
Oh, yeah and the art is pretty spectacular too.
how did I miss this for two and a half weeks? Oh man... I could see where the punchline might not be that funny but there's this kid at my school who talks EXACTLY like that all the time and I could completely hear his voice, "you don't mess with the D, man!"
wow.
Oh, yeah and the art is pretty spectacular too.
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Soon as in later. Probably post-December. However, aperture and I are in contact, so rest assured we are at least thinking about it.
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