EDIT: He's just thinking, not really talking.
My first ever comic, so don't be /too/ harsh.
Anyways, Ragnarok actually measn 'Death of the Gods' (or something like that), so you can expect what's going to happen.
Ragnarok
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Anyways, me and Tweak had a chat yesterday/two days ago, and he convinced me to make a comic.
EDIT: He's just thinking, not really talking.
My first ever comic, so don't be /too/ harsh.
Anyways, Ragnarok actually measn 'Death of the Gods' (or something like that), so you can expect what's going to happen.
EDIT: He's just thinking, not really talking.
My first ever comic, so don't be /too/ harsh.
Anyways, Ragnarok actually measn 'Death of the Gods' (or something like that), so you can expect what's going to happen.
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/me likes.
May I make a few suggestions?
The walking ninjas: have them bent forward a little.
Also, the dialogue seemed off; I think it would have been better if he was talking to a friend or something.
This is just a little thing, but the door should have been open when they were leaving.
Other than those things, it's pretty good, especially for a first comic. I'd like to see where this goes.
May I make a few suggestions?
The walking ninjas: have them bent forward a little.
Also, the dialogue seemed off; I think it would have been better if he was talking to a friend or something.
This is just a little thing, but the door should have been open when they were leaving.
Other than those things, it's pretty good, especially for a first comic. I'd like to see where this goes.
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I forgot to mention, he's just thinking right now.DarkN wrote:/me likes.
May I make a few suggestions?
The walking ninjas: have them bent forward a little.
Also, the dialogue seemed off; I think it would have been better if he was talking to a friend or something.
This is just a little thing, but the door should have been open when they were leaving.
Other than those things, it's pretty good, especially for a first comic. I'd like to see where this goes.
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Ah. It would be good to put in, say, asterisks or italics to indicate his thinking-ness. In the future.
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LittleViking wrote:Oh, sure. I just hope this doesn't open the door to new jokes instead, you know? I'd hate for this to shed some light on more name-related puns. Maybe now they can focus their efforts elsewhere.
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Personally, I think I would have left it at "But...", however I enjoyed the sense of foreboding and the idea of a plot that this will have.
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Seconded.Weisslenny0 wrote:Personally, I think I would have left it at "But...", however I enjoyed the sense of foreboding and the idea of a plot that this will have.
Also,this comic is not usual as other. It's different in some ways I can't explain at the moment.
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Judging by the title, this is going to be epic. I hope you execute the epic-ness well.
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I didn't think 3 panels and 6 lines of text would be so epic. '-_-
Looks like I'm going to have to work hard to make it even better.
Looks like I'm going to have to work hard to make it even better.
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And updating more often!
*discards the hypocrite card*
But yeah, please keep doing this.
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But yeah, please keep doing this.
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I second that notion. This looks insanely awesome. If I didn't say that before, I'm saying it now.
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